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"content": "\"Unfortunately, I only heard a general account of this news and never learned the exact location. Back then, I never imagined there would be a day when I was reborn. Flower Wine Traveler, where exactly did you die?\"\n\nOver the past few days, he had bought a great deal of wine and wandered around the stronghold every night, hoping the scent of alcohol would lure the Wine Worm out. Unfortunately, the Wine Worm never appeared, leaving him deeply disappointed.\n\n\"If I find that Wine Worm and refine it into my vital Gu, it will be far better than the clan's Moonlight Gu. In the blink of an eye, it's already April. Time waits for no one.\" Fang Yuan sighed and turned his gaze toward the window.\n\nUnder the blue sky and white clouds, the verdant mountains stretched into the distance. Closer by stood a grove of bamboo.\n\nThese were spear bamboos unique to Qing Mao Mountain, each stalk straight as a line, its tip extraordinarily sharp, like the point of a spear.\n\nThe woods not far away were already taking on a fresh green hue. The newly sprouted shoots were yellow-green, and now and then a beautiful multicolored bird alighted on a branch.\n\nA spring breeze swept in, carrying the fresh air of green mountains and clear waters as it scattered through the mortal world.\n\nBefore he knew it, the lesson was drawing to a close. The academy elder gave his final announcement: \"Over the past week, I have taught you how to meditate and observe the Aperture and the sea of primeval essence within your bodies, as well as how to sit in meditation and circulate the primeval essence within you. Now it is time to refine your vital Gu. When this lesson ends, go to the academy's Gu room and select a Gu worm. Afterward, return home and cultivate in seclusion. Once you have refined the Gu worm, come back to the academy and continue your lessons. This will also be your first assessment. Whoever comes first will receive the generous reward of twenty primeval stones.\"",
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"content": "You are a literary editor of a fiction translation into English. You are given the SOURCE text and its draft translation.\nBook genre: webnovel. Audience: adult webnovel readers. Book: «蛊真人».\n\nYour mandate is literary editing of the draft against the source:\n- Check the draft's meaning against the source (language «zh»): fix distortions of meaning, misread realia, calqued gestures and idioms — the translator may have rendered an expression literally (e.g. a bow as \"struck his head\"). Lean on the source, but write English, not an interlinear.\n- Fix style: remove calques from «zh», officialese, needless repetition, unnatural constructions; write living literary English. BUT a repetition standing in the same (parallel) positions of the source itself is an authorial refrain: keep it, do not \"vary\" the wording where the author repeats on purpose.\n- Render proper names, terms and realia STRICTLY per the supplied glossary (if attached): bring any divergence to the canonical form, inflecting by context; do not invent other renderings.\n- Layout: assemble the narrative into natural English paragraphs, NOT copying the source's line-by-line breaks (in the original one sentence is often one line). Start each line of direct speech as a new paragraph in double quotation marks. There is no maximum paragraph length.\n- Preserve the draft's COMPLETENESS: do not drop or add sentences; do not re-invent scenes.\n- Units and devices (common to zh→en): convert MEASURES into units the reader knows (时辰 = 2 hours, 三个时辰 ≈ six hours; the fraction 成 means tenths: 六成六 = 66%, not \"6.6\"); render POEMS and titles of classics by meaning, not by transliteration. Check the form of names and terms against the glossary.\n- Honorifics: keep. Foreignization/domestication balance: 0.60.\n\nOutput ONLY the edited translation — with no service preambles, comments, explanations, notes about the edits, or markdown headings.\n\nDISCOURSE RE-PARAGRAPHING (a mandatory operation carrying Chinese parataxis into English hypotactic prose — this is a CONVENTION of the target language, not a liberty):\n1. Silently identify the fragment's narrative moves: a single focal character/observer; an action and its immediate reaction; one line of reasoning; boundaries are a change of speaker, time, place or focal character.\n2. Render one narrative move as ONE English paragraph, EVEN IF the Chinese source is broken into one-clause lines. The tools of merging are participial and subordinate constructions, conjunctions and connectives (build a hierarchy, segment by meaning, mark aspect/tense of predicates, vary the wording, add connectives). Do NOT merge merely for length, and do not lose meaning atoms.\n3. Start every new speech turn as a new paragraph in double quotation marks; keep the speech tag inside that turn's paragraph.\n4. You may merge and split English sentences; the count of sentences and paragraphs need NOT match the source. You may NOT lose meaning atoms (participants, actions, numbers, polarity, headings, and also idioms and chengyu: render them by BOTH meaning components, without collapsing into a general sense — 物是人非 = \"the things are the same, the people are not\", not \"everything has changed\")."
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"content": "CANONICAL RENDERINGS of names and terms (in the draft, the source term on the left MUST be rendered exactly by the form on the right — bring any divergence to it, inflecting by context; do not introduce other variants and do not change anything else):\n- 空窍 → «Aperture»\n- 真元 → «primeval essence»\n- 元石 → «primeval stone»\n- 元海 → «sea of primeval essence»\n- 月光蛊 → «Moonlight Gu»"
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"content": "Source text (language «zh»):\n\n “可惜这个消息，我也只听说了大概，并不知道确切的位置。当时也没想到会有重生的这一天啊。花酒行者，你到底死在哪里？”\n 他这些天来，买了许多酒，一到夜晚就在山寨周围闲逛。想借着散发的酒气，来吸引到酒虫露面。可惜，就是不见那酒虫，结果令人十分失望。\n “若是找到那酒虫，炼化为本命蛊，比家族中的月光蛊要好多了。眨眼间，已经到了四月，时不我待呀。”方源叹了一口气，视线转向窗外。\n 只见蓝天白云下，群山葱茏延绵开去。近处则是一片竹林。\n 这是青茅山特有的矛竹，各个笔直得像一条直线，同时尖端锋锐异常，如同枪尖。\n 不远处的树林，已经泛起了新绿。抽出的嫩芽，黄绿一片。不时有漂亮的彩雀儿，落到枝干上。\n 春风袭来，将青山绿水的清新气息包裹着，吹洒人间。\n 不知不觉间，这堂课接近了尾声。学堂家老最后通知道：“这一周来，我教会你们如何冥想，察看自身的空窍元海。如何打坐，调动体内的真元。现在是时候炼化你们的本命蛊了。这节课结束后，你们就去学堂里的蛊室，挑选蛊虫。选了蛊虫之后，就回家潜修。直到炼化了蛊虫，再来学堂继续上课。同时，这也是你们的第一场考核。谁能拔得头筹，就会有二十块元石的丰厚奖励。”\n\n\nDraft translation to edit:\n\n\"Unfortunately, I only heard a rough account of this news, and never learned the exact location. Back then, I never imagined there would be a day of rebirth. Flower Wine Traveler, just where did you die?\"\n\nThese past days, he had bought much wine and wandered near the mountain stronghold every night, hoping that the scent of alcohol wafting from his body would lure the Wine Worm out. Regrettably, the worm never appeared, and the results proved deeply disappointing.\n\n\"If I could find that Wine Worm and refine it into my natal Gu, it would be far superior to the family's Moonlight Gu. In the blink of an eye, it's already the fourth month—time waits for no one.\" Fang Yuan sighed, turning his gaze toward the window.\n\nBeyond it, under a sky of blue and drifting white clouds, stretched verdant mountain ranges in unbroken succession. Closer by stood a grove of bamboo.\n\nThis was the spear bamboo unique to Green Fur Mountain—every stalk rose as straight as a drawn line, their tips sharp and keen as spear points.\n\nWithin the nearby woods, fresh green was already spreading. Newly sprouted shoots showed patches of yellow-green. From time to time, a beautiful colorful bird would alight upon the branches.\n\nA spring breeze swept in, carrying the crisp fragrance of green hills and clear waters, scattering it across the mortal world.\n\nBefore anyone knew it, the lesson drew to a close. The academy elder announced at last: \"This past week, I have taught you how to meditate and inspect the aperture and the sea of primeval essence within your own bodies. I have taught you how to sit in cultivation and channel the primeval essence within. Now the time has come for you to refine your natal Gu. Once this lesson is over, you shall go to the Gu chamber in the academy to select your Gu worms. After choosing, return home for secluded cultivation. Only when the Gu has been refined are you to come back and resume your lessons. At the same time, this shall serve as your first assessment. Whoever takes first place shall be rewarded handsomely with twenty primeval stones.\""
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