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33 lines
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"finish": "stop",
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"ts": "2026-08-05T15:45:24Z",
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"content": "1. The academy elder laughed aloud with delight — «家老» must be rendered as clan leader\n2. Gu Yue Mo Bei, B-grade aptitude — «元海» rendering is omitted from the recorded statement\n3. This aptitude was ranked from top to bottom — Misstates aptitude as being ranked, rather than divided\n4. become a first-turn veteran Gu Master — «蛊师» must be rendered as Gu Master\n5. become a second-turn Gu Master — «蛊师» must be rendered as Gu Master\n6. become third-turn Gu Masters — «蛊师» must be rendered as Gu Master\n7. become a fourth-turn Gu Master — «蛊师» must be rendered as Gu Master\n8. become a clan elder of the Gu Yue clan — «家老» must be rendered as clan leader",
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"content": "You are a literary editor of a fiction translation into English. You are given the SOURCE text and its draft translation.\nBook genre: webnovel. Audience: adult webnovel readers. Book: «蛊真人».\n\nYour task is ONLY TO FIND the problem spots in the draft. Do not fix or rewrite anything.\n\nWhat to look for, in order of importance:\n- FIDELITY: distortions of meaning against the source (language «zh») — inverted polarity, wrong numbers and ranks, lost or added meaning atoms, misread realia, calqued gestures and idioms (e.g. a bow as \"struck his head\").\n- TERMS: proper names, terms and realia STRICTLY per the supplied glossary (if attached).\n- STYLE: calques from «zh», officialese, unnatural constructions, broken word forms. BUT a repetition standing in the same (parallel) positions of the source is an authorial refrain, not a defect.\n- Units and devices (common to zh→en): MEASURES (时辰 = 2 hours; the fraction 成 means tenths: 六成六 = 66%); POEMS and titles of classics — by meaning.\n\nDo NOT count as defects the places that are correct and read normally. An empty list is a full answer.\n\nRESPONSE FORMAT: a numbered list, one line per defect, in the form\nN. <first 5-8 words of the problem spot> — <what the defect is, up to 10 words>\nIf there are no defects, output exactly one line: NO_CHANGE\nNothing except this list may appear in the response."
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"content": "CANONICAL RENDERINGS of names and terms (in the draft, the source term on the left MUST be rendered exactly by the form on the right — bring any divergence to it, inflecting by context; do not introduce other variants and do not change anything else):\n- 元海 → «sea of primeval essence»\n- 蛊师 → «Gu Master»\n- 族长 → «clan leader»"
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"content": "Source text (language «zh»):\n\n 他身材高大，比同龄人要粗壮得多，透着一丝彪悍气息。\n 三两步过了河，踏上对岸。\n 十步，二十步，三十步，陆续有微光投入到他的体内。\n 一直走到三十六步，终于走不动了。\n 少年们隔岸看得目瞪口呆，学堂家老欢喜得大叫起来：“好，古月漠北，乙等资质，来这里，让我看看你的元海。”\n 古月漠北便又回到学堂家老的身边，后者伸出手，搭在少年的肩膀，闭目凝神探查了一番，便收回手，点点头，在纸上记录起来：“古月漠北，元海六成六，可大力栽培。”\n 这资质从上到下，分甲乙丙丁四等。\n 一位丁等资质的少年，培养个三年，就能晋升成一转的资深蛊师，成为家族的基石。\n 一位丙等资质的少年，培养两年，大多都能成为二转的蛊师，成为家族的中坚存在。\n 一位乙等资质，就要呵护了。往往要作为未来的家老培养，六七年的功夫，能成为三转蛊师。\n 至于甲等资质，哪怕出现一位，都是整个家族的幸运。要细心关照，倾斜资源，十年左右就能成为四转蛊师，到那时便能竞争族长之位！\n 也就是说，这古月漠北只要成长起来，就是今后古月一族的家老。难怪学堂长老喜得哈哈一笑，而暗中关注的众家老们都统统舒了一口气，而后又纷纷向其中一位家老投去羡慕的目光。\n\n\nDraft translation to edit:\n\nHe was tall and powerfully built, far more robust than others his age, radiating a rugged, formidable air. \nCrossing the river in two or three steps, he set foot on the opposite bank. \nTen steps, twenty steps, thirty steps—faint glimmers of light streamed into his body one after another. \nHe pressed on to the thirty-sixth step, and finally could go no further. \n\nThe youths on the far bank watched, dumbstruck. The academy elder laughed aloud with delight: \"Excellent! Gu Yue Mo Bei, B-grade aptitude! Come here, let me examine your sea of primeval essence.\" \n\nGu Yue Mo Bei returned to the academy elder's side, and the latter extended a hand, resting it on the young man's shoulder. Closing his eyes in focused examination for a moment, he withdrew his hand, nodded, and recorded on paper: \"Gu Yue Mo Bei, sea of primeval essence at 66%. Worthy of vigorous cultivation.\" \n\nThis aptitude was ranked from top to bottom into four grades: A, B, C, and D. \nA youth with D-grade aptitude, after three years of training, could advance to a first-turn veteran Gu Master and become the cornerstone of the clan. \nA youth with C-grade aptitude, after two years of training, could mostly become a second-turn Gu Master and serve as the backbone of the clan. \nOne with B-grade aptitude required careful nurturing. Such individuals were typically groomed as future clan elders, and with six or seven years of effort, they could become third-turn Gu Masters. \nAs for A-grade aptitude—even a single appearance was a stroke of fortune for the entire clan. Such a person would be given meticulous attention and a concentration of resources, and within about ten years could become a fourth-turn Gu Master, at which point they could contend for the position of clan leader! \n\nIn other words, so long as Gu Yue Mo Bei matured properly, he would become a clan elder of the Gu Yue clan in the years ahead. No wonder the academy elder laughed heartily, and the clan elders watching in secret all let out sighs of relief, before casting envious glances toward one of their number."
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