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"tag": "ehen-lu-locate-w2",
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"ts": "2026-08-05T15:35:37Z",
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"content": "1. a rough account of this news — “消息” means information, not news specifically\n2. a day of rebirth — “重生的这一天” means rebirth would happen\n3. the scent of alcohol wafting from his body — Source says emitted liquor smell, not body\n4. Green Fur Mountain — Proper name mistranslated; should be Qing Mao Mountain\n5. spear bamboo unique to Green Fur Mountain — “矛竹” is spear bamboo; mountain name wrong\n6. every stalk rose as straight — Source describes each stalk, not necessarily every stalk\n7. a beautiful colorful bird would alight — “彩雀儿” specifically means a colorful sparrow\n8. carrying the crisp fragrance of green hills — “清新气息” means fresh atmosphere, not fragrance\n9. the aperture and the sea of primeval essence — Canonical term requires “Aperture”\n10. channel the primeval essence within — Canonical term requires “primeval essence”; source says mobilize it\n11. refined are you to come back — Source says return after refining the Gu, not passive requirement\n",
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"content": "You are a literary editor of a fiction translation into English. You are given the SOURCE text and its draft translation.\nBook genre: webnovel. Audience: adult webnovel readers. Book: «蛊真人».\n\nYour task is ONLY TO FIND the problem spots in the draft. Do not fix or rewrite anything.\n\nWhat to look for, in order of importance:\n- FIDELITY: distortions of meaning against the source (language «zh») — inverted polarity, wrong numbers and ranks, lost or added meaning atoms, misread realia, calqued gestures and idioms (e.g. a bow as \"struck his head\").\n- TERMS: proper names, terms and realia STRICTLY per the supplied glossary (if attached).\n- STYLE: calques from «zh», officialese, unnatural constructions, broken word forms. BUT a repetition standing in the same (parallel) positions of the source is an authorial refrain, not a defect.\n- Units and devices (common to zh→en): MEASURES (时辰 = 2 hours; the fraction 成 means tenths: 六成六 = 66%); POEMS and titles of classics — by meaning.\n\nDo NOT count as defects the places that are correct and read normally. An empty list is a full answer.\n\nRESPONSE FORMAT: a numbered list, one line per defect, in the form\nN. <first 5-8 words of the problem spot> — <what the defect is, up to 10 words>\nIf there are no defects, output exactly one line: NO_CHANGE\nNothing except this list may appear in the response."
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"content": "CANONICAL RENDERINGS of names and terms (in the draft, the source term on the left MUST be rendered exactly by the form on the right — bring any divergence to it, inflecting by context; do not introduce other variants and do not change anything else):\n- 空窍 → «Aperture»\n- 真元 → «primeval essence»\n- 元石 → «primeval stone»\n- 元海 → «sea of primeval essence»\n- 月光蛊 → «Moonlight Gu»"
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"content": "Source text (language «zh»):\n\n “可惜这个消息，我也只听说了大概，并不知道确切的位置。当时也没想到会有重生的这一天啊。花酒行者，你到底死在哪里？”\n 他这些天来，买了许多酒，一到夜晚就在山寨周围闲逛。想借着散发的酒气，来吸引到酒虫露面。可惜，就是不见那酒虫，结果令人十分失望。\n “若是找到那酒虫，炼化为本命蛊，比家族中的月光蛊要好多了。眨眼间，已经到了四月，时不我待呀。”方源叹了一口气，视线转向窗外。\n 只见蓝天白云下，群山葱茏延绵开去。近处则是一片竹林。\n 这是青茅山特有的矛竹，各个笔直得像一条直线，同时尖端锋锐异常，如同枪尖。\n 不远处的树林，已经泛起了新绿。抽出的嫩芽，黄绿一片。不时有漂亮的彩雀儿，落到枝干上。\n 春风袭来，将青山绿水的清新气息包裹着，吹洒人间。\n 不知不觉间，这堂课接近了尾声。学堂家老最后通知道：“这一周来，我教会你们如何冥想，察看自身的空窍元海。如何打坐，调动体内的真元。现在是时候炼化你们的本命蛊了。这节课结束后，你们就去学堂里的蛊室，挑选蛊虫。选了蛊虫之后，就回家潜修。直到炼化了蛊虫，再来学堂继续上课。同时，这也是你们的第一场考核。谁能拔得头筹，就会有二十块元石的丰厚奖励。”\n\n\nDraft translation to edit:\n\n\"Unfortunately, I only heard a rough account of this news, and never learned the exact location. Back then, I never imagined there would be a day of rebirth. Flower Wine Traveler, just where did you die?\"\n\nThese past days, he had bought much wine and wandered near the mountain stronghold every night, hoping that the scent of alcohol wafting from his body would lure the Wine Worm out. Regrettably, the worm never appeared, and the results proved deeply disappointing.\n\n\"If I could find that Wine Worm and refine it into my natal Gu, it would be far superior to the family's Moonlight Gu. In the blink of an eye, it's already the fourth month—time waits for no one.\" Fang Yuan sighed, turning his gaze toward the window.\n\nBeyond it, under a sky of blue and drifting white clouds, stretched verdant mountain ranges in unbroken succession. Closer by stood a grove of bamboo.\n\nThis was the spear bamboo unique to Green Fur Mountain—every stalk rose as straight as a drawn line, their tips sharp and keen as spear points.\n\nWithin the nearby woods, fresh green was already spreading. Newly sprouted shoots showed patches of yellow-green. From time to time, a beautiful colorful bird would alight upon the branches.\n\nA spring breeze swept in, carrying the crisp fragrance of green hills and clear waters, scattering it across the mortal world.\n\nBefore anyone knew it, the lesson drew to a close. The academy elder announced at last: \"This past week, I have taught you how to meditate and inspect the aperture and the sea of primeval essence within your own bodies. I have taught you how to sit in cultivation and channel the primeval essence within. Now the time has come for you to refine your natal Gu. Once this lesson is over, you shall go to the Gu chamber in the academy to select your Gu worms. After choosing, return home for secluded cultivation. Only when the Gu has been refined are you to come back and resume your lessons. At the same time, this shall serve as your first assessment. Whoever takes first place shall be rewarded handsomely with twenty primeval stones.\""
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