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"ts": "2026-08-05T03:27:50Z",
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"content": "You are a literary editor of a fiction translation into English. You are given the SOURCE text and its draft translation.\nGenre: webnovel. Audience: adult webnovel readers. Book: «蛊真人».\n\nYour mandate is literary editing of the draft against the source:\n- Check the draft's meaning against the source (language «zh»): fix distortions of meaning, misread realia, calqued gestures and idioms.\n- Fix style: remove calques from «zh», officialese, unnatural constructions; write living literary English. BUT a repetition standing in parallel positions of the source is an authorial refrain: keep it.\n- Render proper names, terms and realia STRICTLY per the supplied glossary (if attached): bring any divergence to the canonical form; do not invent other renderings.\n- Layout: assemble the narrative into natural English paragraphs, NOT copying the source's line-by-line breaks. Start each new line of direct speech on a new paragraph.\n- Preserve the draft's COMPLETENESS: do not drop or add sentences; do not re-invent scenes.\n- Honorifics: keep. Foreignization/domestication balance: 0.60.\n\nOutput ONLY the edited translation — no preambles, comments, notes or markdown headings."
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"content": "CANONICAL RENDERINGS of names and terms (in the draft, the source term on the left MUST be rendered exactly by the form on the right — bring any divergence to it, inflecting by context; do not introduce other variants and do not change anything else):\n- 空窍 → «Aperture»\n- 真元 → «primeval essence»\n- 元石 → «primeval stone»\n- 元海 → «sea of primeval essence»\n- 月光蛊 → «Moonlight Gu»"
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"content": "Source text (language «zh»):\n\n “可惜这个消息，我也只听说了大概，并不知道确切的位置。当时也没想到会有重生的这一天啊。花酒行者，你到底死在哪里？”\n 他这些天来，买了许多酒，一到夜晚就在山寨周围闲逛。想借着散发的酒气，来吸引到酒虫露面。可惜，就是不见那酒虫，结果令人十分失望。\n “若是找到那酒虫，炼化为本命蛊，比家族中的月光蛊要好多了。眨眼间，已经到了四月，时不我待呀。”方源叹了一口气，视线转向窗外。\n 只见蓝天白云下，群山葱茏延绵开去。近处则是一片竹林。\n 这是青茅山特有的矛竹，各个笔直得像一条直线，同时尖端锋锐异常，如同枪尖。\n 不远处的树林，已经泛起了新绿。抽出的嫩芽，黄绿一片。不时有漂亮的彩雀儿，落到枝干上。\n 春风袭来，将青山绿水的清新气息包裹着，吹洒人间。\n 不知不觉间，这堂课接近了尾声。学堂家老最后通知道：“这一周来，我教会你们如何冥想，察看自身的空窍元海。如何打坐，调动体内的真元。现在是时候炼化你们的本命蛊了。这节课结束后，你们就去学堂里的蛊室，挑选蛊虫。选了蛊虫之后，就回家潜修。直到炼化了蛊虫，再来学堂继续上课。同时，这也是你们的第一场考核。谁能拔得头筹，就会有二十块元石的丰厚奖励。”\n\n\nDraft translation to edit:\n\n\"Unfortunately, I only heard a rough account of this news, and never learned the exact location. Back then, I never imagined there would be a day of rebirth. Flower Wine Traveler, just where did you die?\"\n\nThese past days, he had bought much wine and wandered near the mountain stronghold every night, hoping that the scent of alcohol wafting from his body would lure the Wine Worm out. Regrettably, the worm never appeared, and the results proved deeply disappointing.\n\n\"If I could find that Wine Worm and refine it into my natal Gu, it would be far superior to the family's Moonlight Gu. In the blink of an eye, it's already the fourth month—time waits for no one.\" Fang Yuan sighed, turning his gaze toward the window.\n\nBeyond it, under a sky of blue and drifting white clouds, stretched verdant mountain ranges in unbroken succession. Closer by stood a grove of bamboo.\n\nThis was the spear bamboo unique to Green Fur Mountain—every stalk rose as straight as a drawn line, their tips sharp and keen as spear points.\n\nWithin the nearby woods, fresh green was already spreading. Newly sprouted shoots showed patches of yellow-green. From time to time, a beautiful colorful bird would alight upon the branches.\n\nA spring breeze swept in, carrying the crisp fragrance of green hills and clear waters, scattering it across the mortal world.\n\nBefore anyone knew it, the lesson drew to a close. The academy elder announced at last: \"This past week, I have taught you how to meditate and inspect the aperture and the sea of primeval essence within your own bodies. I have taught you how to sit in cultivation and channel the primeval essence within. Now the time has come for you to refine your natal Gu. Once this lesson is over, you shall go to the Gu chamber in the academy to select your Gu worms. After choosing, return home for secluded cultivation. Only when the Gu has been refined are you to come back and resume your lessons. At the same time, this shall serve as your first assessment. Whoever takes first place shall be rewarded handsomely with twenty primeval stones.\""
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"content": "\"Unfortunately, I only heard a rough account of it, and never learned the exact location. Back then, I never imagined there would be a day of rebirth. Flower Wine Traveler, just where did you die?\"\n\nThese past days, he had bought a great deal of wine and wandered near the mountain stronghold every night, hoping the scent of alcohol wafting from his body would lure the Wine Worm out. Regrettably, the Wine Worm never appeared, and the results were deeply disappointing.\n\n\"If I could find that Wine Worm and refine it into my natal Gu, it would be far superior to the family's Moonlight Gu. In the blink of an eye, it's already April—time waits for no one.\" Fang Yuan sighed, turning his gaze toward the window.\n\nBeyond the window, under a blue sky with drifting white clouds, verdant mountain ranges stretched away in unbroken succession. Nearby stood a grove of bamboo.\n\nThis was the spear bamboo unique to Green Fur Mountain—every stalk rose as straight as a line, their tips extraordinarily sharp like spearpoints.\n\nIn the nearby woods, fresh green was already spreading. Newly sprouted buds showed patches of yellow-green. From time to time, a beautiful, colorful bird would alight upon the branches.\n\nA spring breeze wafted over, carrying the crisp fragrance of green hills and clear waters, scattering it across the mortal world.\n\nBefore anyone realized it, the lesson drew to a close. The academy elder finally announced: \"This past week, I have taught you how to meditate and observe your own Aperture and sea of primeval essence. I have taught you how to sit in cultivation and channel the primeval essence within your bodies. Now the time has come for you to refine your natal Gu. Once this lesson is over, go to the academy's Gu chamber and select a Gu worm. After choosing, return home to cultivate in seclusion. Only once the Gu is refined are you to come back and resume your lessons. At the same time, this shall serve as your first assessment. Whoever takes first place will be handsomely rewarded with twenty primeval stones.\""
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